April 2011
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Help me with this poem!
Ok so I have written a first draft of the poem based off of the crocheted circle. I am trying an ekphrastic self portrait meaphor thing. I can’t tell if the poem is too short and not saying enough. Any thoughts?
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I am as this circle:
complete and strong.
The strips loose and weak,
are now woven together:
holding tight.
Loop, loop,
pull through.
(repeat)
Pieces,
little bits...
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Despite the shitty weather :)
Today sucks. i have no tent and its rainy and windy and sucky
